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I fixed some spelling / grammar stuff as well as did some revising of stuff that was a bit verbose or just seemed a little off (like mixing turnRadarRight and turnRadarRightRadians in the same code snippet). I'd never heard of a "Perfect Lock" as a proper name like that, so I edited that part a little, too. The "wide radar" code could be a ''lot'' shorter, but I don't have time to make sure I get it right at the moment. Nice job with the page, Chase, it looks great. --[[User:Voidious|Voidious]] 14:30, 12 November 2007 (UTC) | I fixed some spelling / grammar stuff as well as did some revising of stuff that was a bit verbose or just seemed a little off (like mixing turnRadarRight and turnRadarRightRadians in the same code snippet). I'd never heard of a "Perfect Lock" as a proper name like that, so I edited that part a little, too. The "wide radar" code could be a ''lot'' shorter, but I don't have time to make sure I get it right at the moment. Nice job with the page, Chase, it looks great. --[[User:Voidious|Voidious]] 14:30, 12 November 2007 (UTC) | ||
| + | : I made the first and last bits of the page. AaronR added the first set of snippets, I just added the wide radar and information on the Melee radars (as I don't know a great deal about them). The wide radar could indeed be a ''lot'' shorter. I can probably fix that after class. --[[User:Chase-san|Chase-san]] 14:33, 12 November 2007 (UTC) | ||
Revision as of 15:33, 12 November 2007
Mind if I work on this after I get my page put togeather? --Chase-san
- Not a problem. It is a wiki, after all. --AaronR 07:46, 12 November 2007 (UTC)
I fixed some spelling / grammar stuff as well as did some revising of stuff that was a bit verbose or just seemed a little off (like mixing turnRadarRight and turnRadarRightRadians in the same code snippet). I'd never heard of a "Perfect Lock" as a proper name like that, so I edited that part a little, too. The "wide radar" code could be a lot shorter, but I don't have time to make sure I get it right at the moment. Nice job with the page, Chase, it looks great. --Voidious 14:30, 12 November 2007 (UTC)
- I made the first and last bits of the page. AaronR added the first set of snippets, I just added the wide radar and information on the Melee radars (as I don't know a great deal about them). The wide radar could indeed be a lot shorter. I can probably fix that after class. --Chase-san 14:33, 12 November 2007 (UTC)
